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[Derek32]

my parents dont pay for anything. i do. they have yet to pay for anyhting exept 2 of my dragons but i payed them back the next week. im comoletely on my own with my hobbies

 

[Roja]

Derek,

First, congratulations on being such a businessman at such a young age. Drive, determination and guts are rare at just 15. My daughter is 15 and she is quite the little entrepreneur herself, I love seeing it. You're going to learn a LOT from this experience that I'm sure will help you be even more successful in the future.

That said, you really need to find someone to proof-read and edit your site for you. You have a LOT of grammatical errors, misspellings, poor sentence structure, etc. I wouldn't expect a teen to have all that down perfectly, but if you are going to present yourself in a professional manner, you really need to get on those details. There are many people who would change their mind about purchasing from you just by seeing how many errors are on your website -- it doesn't come off professional at all. I don't want to discourage you at all, rather to encourage you. It's amazing that you've pulled it together this far alone! You should be congratulated.

I do agree with some of the other posters here that starting slow is better. I've been an entrepreneur my entire life and own 2 businesses now and am starting another this summer. Successful businesses. And having been someone that started young, in high school like you, one that I can tell you is that I never regretted taking my time and doing less than I planned on... but I always regretted doing too much. You can always ramp it up after you test the waters. A sure sign of immaturity (and in business, poor judgment) is being too excited and doing too much, too soon.

I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors and I hope that your babies are healthy, happy and go to good homes. Take your time, keep researching and learning and always put the health and well-being of the animals first.

Good luck!

 

[Derek32]

thanks! and i know, i keep trying to fix the site but i usually do it at school durring lunch and their keybords have messed up keys ill have to take some time this week to sit down at home and slowly re do it.

 

[w0554096]

Do you write your posts on this website from school as well?
It seems like you're writing on msn, or texting almost, and it does discourage people from taking you seriously. I'm not trying to be rude or mean, but I think it's been said that it's very hard to read your posts fluently and respect what you're trying to say when it's so poorly edited.

 

[Yourbeat]

So she's very beat up an looks like she had a rough life, so let's give her one more clutch to add onto a long list of bad care and neglect.....awesome you've also had her up for sale all over fauna looking sick with her hips showing claiming 400 graams? I never seen a dragon at 400 grams with there hips showing....stop trying to break into a hobby with enough *****s in it already that treat there animals like crap and get off on the right foot bc with the 300 ads you posted in. The last 2 Weeks is allll gonna show up when your future customers research you in the future. I'm the one you tried gettting the adult female green iguana off of that you intended on breeding to your male......stop, take a breath, and realize how your starting off in the dragon community and do research...and then do some more. And affter that ask the good breeders like tom from tnd who took the time to post in here for some help along the way.....

 

[Jess]

... You're breeding iggies now too? Oh my...

 

[Yourbeat]

He tried to get my female....but it wasn't happening after istarted to realize what he was getting at